They're not super strong, but they're simple enough to complete each day! I think they're decent for what they are. Hoping this helps me get used to writing more
I think it's a good start, and you're making some very slick looking strips (I don't mean that in a bad way at all). Keep it up. Keep them sincere. There's a lot of respect for good, sincere journal comics out there.
No, don't think so. I think there's less connection between the first panel and the thought in the other two, but so what? If it's what you're thinking and feeling, it's not wrong. It's when you make up things to 'make a better comic' that I think this comic would suffer.
It definitely is a sort of stream of consciousness thing. It was supposed to be reportorial to a point, but I tried to make it make sense but like blah
Looks like you're starting something good here. If I might ask, how do you feel about these strips? Seems there's been some good response to them.
ReplyDeleteThey're not super strong, but they're simple enough to complete each day! I think they're decent for what they are. Hoping this helps me get used to writing more
ReplyDeleteI think it's a good start, and you're making some very slick looking strips (I don't mean that in a bad way at all). Keep it up. Keep them sincere. There's a lot of respect for good, sincere journal comics out there.
DeleteThanks! Do you feel this particular one was a bit off?
DeleteNo, don't think so. I think there's less connection between the first panel and the thought in the other two, but so what? If it's what you're thinking and feeling, it's not wrong. It's when you make up things to 'make a better comic' that I think this comic would suffer.
DeleteIt definitely is a sort of stream of consciousness thing. It was supposed to be reportorial to a point, but I tried to make it make sense but like blah
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